Beau Posted September 22, 2014 Report Share Posted September 22, 2014 Give some honest feedback please. Let me know what points I should be working on. Thank you for your time! Rate/sub https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vJE_Li3nRd8 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ibro Posted September 22, 2014 Report Share Posted September 22, 2014 Hey @@Beau. Do you run the sharkbrew Twitter account? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
G H 0 S T Posted September 22, 2014 Report Share Posted September 22, 2014 Lol wtf Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
roflcats Posted September 22, 2014 Report Share Posted September 22, 2014 im gonna pray for you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aquaxi Posted September 22, 2014 Report Share Posted September 22, 2014 No offense but this was pretty bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Persian Tom Posted September 22, 2014 Report Share Posted September 22, 2014 Lol Beau.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beau Posted September 22, 2014 Author Report Share Posted September 22, 2014 No offense but this was pretty bad. I can intake that, but what aspects specifically? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aquaxi Posted September 22, 2014 Report Share Posted September 22, 2014 I can intake that, but what aspects specifically? Music wise, there was absolutely no flow. You stumbled, if you write something down, follow it, organize yourself more. "Maybe smd, something fucking brown sticky stuff" - What even? "Yeah playa" - Slightly annoying, not catchy. If you're trying to have an aspect of comedy; it's not there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wardy Posted September 22, 2014 Report Share Posted September 22, 2014 The lyrics didn't flow whatsoever. It's not 'bad', but I can't credit it for being good either. Keep up the practice though, you can always get better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
U mad tr0ll Posted September 22, 2014 Report Share Posted September 22, 2014 Music wise, there was absolutely no flow. You stumbled, if you write something down, follow it, organize yourself more. "Maybe smd, something fucking brown sticky stuff" - What even? "Yeah playa" - Slightly annoying, not catchy. If you're trying to have an aspect of comedy; it's not there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ibro Posted September 22, 2014 Report Share Posted September 22, 2014 rof. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ibro Posted September 22, 2014 Report Share Posted September 22, 2014 im sorry im cringing so hard Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rijn Posted September 22, 2014 Report Share Posted September 22, 2014 the song is overused. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twitch Posted September 22, 2014 Report Share Posted September 22, 2014 song name? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The real Nick Hamilton Posted September 22, 2014 Report Share Posted September 22, 2014 who the fuck is this guy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beau Posted September 22, 2014 Author Report Share Posted September 22, 2014 I actually don't write any of this down though that's the thing. I just record and of I mess up I may restart the entire thing over. @@Aquaxi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aquaxi Posted September 22, 2014 Report Share Posted September 22, 2014 I actually don't write any of this down though that's the thing. I just record and of I mess up I may restart the entire thing over. @@Aquaxi Start writing it down. Organization is key. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tom Valor Posted September 22, 2014 Report Share Posted September 22, 2014 lololol, rapping about runescape is pretty potato masher. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CALUM Posted September 22, 2014 Report Share Posted September 22, 2014 lololol, rapping about runescape is pretty potato masher. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sudo_ Posted September 22, 2014 Report Share Posted September 22, 2014 broccoli Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Richard Posted September 22, 2014 Report Share Posted September 22, 2014 I suck massive cock, does that count? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Destroy Posted September 23, 2014 Report Share Posted September 23, 2014 mod mark Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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